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Ariel's ticklish adventure 3

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"Oh dear... oh dear..." Jane said nervously. Jane and Ariel's faces were struck with fright, as they were surrouned by the huge horde of baboons. Ariel and Jane backed up slowly, "Jane?" "Yeah? Ariel gulped, "I think now would be a good time to-" GRRRRAWAAW! The baboons growled menacingly and lunged after the two princesses. "RUUUN!" Ariel and Jane shrieked, running for their lives, with the baboons racing after their heels. Both of them screaming, running, gasping for breath as they ran towards no end of the jungle. Hope was seen in front though: A huge vine! "JANE! THAT VINE CAN HOLD US BOTH!" Jane turned to Ariel, "OH... ALRIGHT, LET'S DO IT! ON THE COUNT OF 3! 1... 2... 3!" Both of them jumped with all their strength and had grabbed onto the vine. The baboons stopped and snarled loudly as they swung away. "Hehehe! We sure beat them!" Ariel said snickering. "Hahah yes indeed, Close one that wa-" *THUD* Unfortunatley, hope ran out. The vine had swung all the way into a giant tree, knocking Ariel and Jane out. "Oh.... Ja...ne..." Ariel said fading out.
"ARIEEEL!" Tarzan shouted, swinging through the air. "Gosh I hope I find her soon, or else Jane will be steemed at me. Tarzan had been searching for Ariel for quite some time now, not finding any clue to where she could be. He decided to go back to the treehouse to see if Ariel had returned there. "Ariel? Are you here?!" He looked around, searching every room. "Wait... where is Jane?" Tarzan had noticed she was gone. "Hmm? A note?" He read the note, running his fingers down the words. "Well, at least I know where Jane i-" His thoughts were interrupted by a shouting outside. Tarzan looked outside to see the captain and an England boat boy. He swung down right next to them. "Hi captains. What can I do for you?" "Tarzan, is Ariel not home or something? I've been looking for her around this area forever!" The captain said worried. "Unfortunatley, she got in a bit of trouble. It's a long story, but I'll find her eventually." Tarzan said confidently. "Might I ask where Miss Porter is as well? The second captain here was supposed to take her to England for a day!" Tarzan's face then turned white. "She didn't go with you yet?! Oh no... this is bad!" Tarzan saw that Jane had took her England outfit with her, he knew she was in trouble. "Err Tarzan, is something wrong?" He asked curiously. "No time to explain captain, I'll be back with Ariel and Jane soon!" He said, leaping onto a vine, swinging into the jungle. "Hold on girls, I'm coming!"
"Oh... my head." Ariel said moaning. She looked around, still half asleep, and saw that Jane was next to her, knocked out. "Jane! Jane wake up!" She tried to touch her, but then noticed something! They're arms, and legs were tied to a tree with vines! "Uagh! I can- ugh! Break- free!" She struggled to escape, but it was no use. Jane had began to awoke next to Ariel. "Oh... gosh what happened?" Jane said moaning. "I think we hit a tree while we were swinging. The baboons probably took us here and tied us up. But they don't seem to be here right now." Ariel was right. The baboons were nowhere to be seen. She looked at Jane up and down, scanning her. "Jane, what on earth happened to you before you found me?" Jane took a deep breath, "Well, it all started when..." Jane explained what happened to her to Ariel. "Wow! That's almost the same thing that happened to me! I wonder who the strange ape man is..." Ariel said wondering. "I don't know, but he sure likes to tickle us." Jane said giggling. Ariel blowed her hair out of her face, showing that she was bored. "Well now what do we-" She was soon interrupted by a stampede of baboons coming towards them! Both of them shrieked as they ran towards them, growling. But Ariel and Jane soon heard nothing when they closed their eyes. Both opened their eyes to see the baboons stopped looking straight at them. "What-what do they want?!" Ariel said nervously. Then, the alpha male and the baby baboon stepped forward, talking directly to Jane. "Ehehooohh EAHAHEH! Ohahah!" The alpha said snarling. Jane gulped and turned to Ariel. "They said they want your boots, or else they will take them by... 'force'." Ariel's face turned pale white, "They can have them! THEY CAN HAVE THEM! Tell em, quick quick!" "Alright alright, I'll try... Eheoeoahh ahaha ehhhooo haheha!" Jane said to the alpha in baboon speak. The alpha seemed to understand and snatched the boots off of Ariel's feet, giving them to the baby. The baby hugged them tightly, as if they were his prized possessions. Ariel rolled her eyes at the baby. "Alright, now untie us! Ehehehaah oooahahe eheha!" Jane demanded in baboon. The alpha gave a vicious look, but was starting to untie her. Suddenly the baby baboon spoke! "Ehehaha oooehehah eheheeh!" The alpha turned around to the baby, now whispering to each other. "Jane, what did the baby say?!" Jane was white in the face, "He said to not let them go yet! We can have fun with them!" Ariel started to worry. The baby and the alpha then turned to the 2 baboons behind them and shouted something to them. "What- what are they doing?" Ariel asked shaking. "I don't know Ariel!" The 4 baboons split up to Jane and Ariel, by their feet. Then, they started scrambling their fingers all over their feet! "AHAHAHAHAHA OH NOOOOOO AHHAHAHAHEHEHA NO AGAAAIIIAHAHAHAHAHAH!" Jane said laughing. "NO PLEASE AHAHAHAOOOEHSHAH WE'VE HAD AHAHAHAHEEHAH ENOOOUGH EHEHEHAHAOOAHAHAH!" Ariel pleaded, but the baboons did not waver. They continued to drive their fingers into the poor women's feet harder and quicker. "AHEHEHAHAHAHAHAHHHHHHHHHH NOOOOOOOOO OEHEHAHAAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAH!" Jane was now crying for mercy, as well as Ariel, "NOOO PLEEAASE AHAHAHAHAHEHEH OHOHOAHAHEHEHEHAH AHAHAHAHAHEHEHAAHH! STOOPPP AHAHAH TICKLING USSSS AHAHAHAH!" Suddenly, the baboons stopped! Ariel and Jane were gasping for breath, with tears streaming down their red face. But it was a short breather, for then the baboons started to lick their toes and soles! "AIIIIIIEEE! AHAHAHAAHEHEHAH NOOOO ANYTHING BUT AHAHAHAHAAH THAT AHEHEHAHAOAHAHAHAHEHEA!" Jane pleaded, shrieking with laughter. "AHAHAHAHAHEEHAH PLEASE, WE'LL DO AHAHAHAHEHEOAHAHEHEHA ANYTHIIING AHAHAHEHEHAHAOOOHHAHAHAH!" Ariel begged, but they would not budge. They licked and licked harder, not showing any mercy. "AHAHAHEHEHAHA EHEHAHAHAOHOAHAHAH SOMEBODY AHHAHAHA HEEELP AHSHEHEOOAHAHEHEHE!" Both Ariel and Jane shrieked for help at the sound of their lungs, and it worked.
"UAHAHAHA!" Tarzan had came at last, sweeping in the clearing, scaring the baboons. The baboons ran away, but were coming back fast. "Comon, let's get you two out of here!" He untied both of their legs and arms, grabbing a vine. "Wait, what about your boots Ariel?!" Jane shouted. But the horde of baboons came racing towards them at full speed! "FORGET THE BOOTS, GO TARZAN GO!" Tarzan took no hesitation. Ariel and Jane held onto the vine, with Tarzan swinging it, with their full might. "Whew... that was close! Tarzan we are so glad to see you! Aren't we Ja- OH NO JANE!" Ariel and Tarzan looked at Jane with her face red, laughing. "AHAHAHAHAH OOHOAHAHAH GET THIS THING AHAHAHEHEHA OFF MY FOOT AHAHEHEHAHAH!" Surely enough, a baboon had latched onto Jane's foot, licking it! "AHEHEHAHAH ARIEL AHAHEHEOAOAHHEH HEEELP AHAHAH!" Jane pleaded. "I'M TRYING! STOP SQUIRMING!" Ariel wacked the baboon hard, and it came off like a snap. Unfortunatley, Jane and Ariel had fell off of the vine into the abyss. "ARIEL! JAAANE!" Both of them shrieked as they fell. The fall was short as they crashed into a tangle of vines, both of them all tangled up. "Uagh! JANE! Are you alright!?" Ariel shouted. "Yes, I'm fine! We're both dreadfully tangled though!" Jane said struggling. Tarzan had sweeped down onto a tree, spotting both Ariel and Jane. "Hey! You two alright? It's going to take me a minute to get down there! There are no vines, so I'll have to climb down!" He shouted. "Alright! Be quick though!"  They both said. Then, they both saw 2 little brown monkeys climbing on the vines to them. "Aww, they're so cuute!" Ariel said giggling. The 2 monkeys split up, one going to Ariel's foot, and one going to Jane's foot. "Oh no... Ariel!" Jane shouted looking at Ariel. Ariel turned pale and said, "Not again!" As soon as she had said it, the 2 monkeys began to tickle them! "AHAHAHAHAHA! NOOOO AHEHEHAHA NOT AGAAAIN AHEHEHAHAHAH! WHYYY AHAHEHEHAHAHOAHAH!" Jane shouted with laughter. Jane's monkey was wiggling her toes, which was her most ticklish spot. Ariel's monkey was running his finger down her soft sole. "AHAHAHAHAHE NOOOO EEHEHAHAHEHEH PLEAAASE AHEHEHAHAHAHA OHHAHEHEHAHAAHAHEHAH! I CAN'T BARE IT AHAHEHEHAHAHOAHAHAH EHAHAOAHEEHAHAH!" Both of them were crying again, and as if it couldn't get worse, the monkeys began to lick them! "AAIIIEIE AHAHAHAHAHEEHAHAH STOP STOP NO NO AHEHEAHAHEHEHAHAHEEHAHAHE!" Jane shrieked liked she never did before. "Hold on girls, I'm almost there!" Tarzan hurried even faster down the trees. "HURRY AHAHAHEHEHA TARZAAAN EHEHAHAOEHEHAHAAHAHEHE!" For what seemed to be forever, Tarzan had reached Ariel and Jane, shooing the monkeys away. "Man, you girls have been in a ticklish adventure today haven't you?" He said laughing. Jane and Ariel rolled their eyes. Tarzan then gave a light stroke to each foot, both of them jumped with a giggle. "TARZAN!" Both girls shouted with red faces. "Alright alright, sheeesh!" Tarzan untied them both, and carried them onto the vine that was tangled, swinging into the jungle.
"What an adventure that was!" Ariel said plopping down on the couch, Jane along with her. "Oh my... I never want to be tickled again... in my life!" Tarzan smiled, snickering. "Thank you so much Tarzan! But, how on earth did you find us?!" Ariel asked curiously. "Well, another ape man had told me what happened to you two. I asked where the baboon home was, and he told me." Ariel and Jane both perked up and said, "We met him!" "Yeah, he was the strange man who tickled us, seeming curious about out feet! And he took Jane's boots!" Ariel stating. Tarzan laughed, "Well, he liked you guys smiling when he was tickling you. He even understood you pleading Jane, but he loved seeing you laugh!" Jane and Ariel both chuckled. "Well Jane, Tarzan, It's time I get going back to Eric. I'm sure he's worried sick!" Jane lead Ariel to the door, and waved goodbye to her as she climbed down the treehouse. "I'LL SEE YOU NEXT TIME I HOPE!" Jane shouted. "SURE THING! IF IT DOESN'T INVOLVE TICKLING!" Ariel said laughing. She then started to walk to the shore, now remembering where the boats were. The captain walked up to her, dumbfounded. "Miss Ariel, what on earth happened?!" He asked. "It's a long story captain just take me home..." Ariel said moaning. The captain shrugged, and Ariel hopped in the boat. They arrived on the shores of Ariel's home beach, and she waved goodbye as she walked home barefoot. "Well, at least my feet are tough now!" Ariel said giggling. All that she went through, her barefeet were now tough, steady, and strong, yet still pink soft. "There is one thing I learned though. I NEVER WANTED TO BE TICKLED AGAIN!" She shouted, as she ran home to Eric, hoping that she never has an experience like that again...

THE END... OR IS IT?!
Well here is the finale of Ariel's adventure! Sorry this took long, what with school and all. The part where Jane and Ariel are tangled in vines was inspired by this grand piece of art by flying hamster, [link]

And now I have a request. If anyone could make an art of The baboons, and the strange ape man, tickling Ariel and Jane, that would be awesome! Anyway, ENJOY!
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Love Disney feet tickling